Hey Nick! I as well didn't receive any comments on my second elevator pitch, so I just went along with it! It's great that you feel confident and comfortable with your presentation, I did as well! I would like to offer you some feedback in the area of your video representation. I know it's hard to get the camera angle at the perfect shot, but if you had it a bit more elevated I think the presentation could look a lot better! But like I said, I know it's REALLY hard to get that on point, so if this was the best you could do, then I 100% understand! Great work!
Hey Nick! I liked how you opened the elevator speech. You simply just told someone, you were going to tell them about your product and asserted dominance. I would say the only thing that held you back is the camera angle and your direction. I want to feel like you're talking to me, not someone else. But Other than that, you did a great job and I cant wait to hear more about your product and company!
Nick, This is a very good elevator pitch. You spoke with great confidence and seemed very passionate about your product. You're dressed accordingly and I felt the professionalism in your tone. Here's two things to work on for the future. You should adjust the camera forward towards you so I feel like you're talking to me as well as the rest of the audience. There were also some moments I couldn't grasp what you were saying because of the pace of your speaking. Slow it down a bit so the information can sink into the heads of your audience. Otherwise, great job!
Hey Nick! I as well didn't receive any comments on my second elevator pitch, so I just went along with it! It's great that you feel confident and comfortable with your presentation, I did as well! I would like to offer you some feedback in the area of your video representation. I know it's hard to get the camera angle at the perfect shot, but if you had it a bit more elevated I think the presentation could look a lot better! But like I said, I know it's REALLY hard to get that on point, so if this was the best you could do, then I 100% understand! Great work!
ReplyDeleteHey Nick! I liked how you opened the elevator speech. You simply just told someone, you were going to tell them about your product and asserted dominance. I would say the only thing that held you back is the camera angle and your direction. I want to feel like you're talking to me, not someone else. But Other than that, you did a great job and I cant wait to hear more about your product and company!
ReplyDeleteNick,
ReplyDeleteThis is a very good elevator pitch. You spoke with great confidence and seemed very passionate about your product. You're dressed accordingly and I felt the professionalism in your tone. Here's two things to work on for the future. You should adjust the camera forward towards you so I feel like you're talking to me as well as the rest of the audience. There were also some moments I couldn't grasp what you were saying because of the pace of your speaking. Slow it down a bit so the information can sink into the heads of your audience. Otherwise, great job!